Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, educational centers play a significant role in the lives of human beings since they mainly determine the level of success and progress in the society. In this regard, universities should provide a excellent condition for both students and professors to do their best. I am of the opinion that factors like improving universities' facilities is more important than increasing the salaries of university professors to enhance the quality of education. The reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborated on in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, high-quality equipment and facilities will help both students and professors to become expert in their field. To be more specific, professors and students require to have special equipment to perform their projects in an excellent fashion. In this case, facilities, such as higher standard computers in the labs, well equiped laboratories, and facilities for exercise play a crucial role for improvement of the quality of education. For instance, student are able to use the computers which are connected to the Internet for have a great research for their thesis. Besides, not only students but also professors are enable to have a connection with other experts and well-known people all over the world. As a result, doing well done researches in every universities is a key factor for enhance the quality of education.
Moreover, universities can spend extra money on hiring prestigious professors to improve the quality of educaiton. To put it in other words, well-educated professors are able to convey their knowledge to students, and supervise students with their projects. In this case, student will be more motivated and strong in their field of study if they employ well-known professors' useful experiences to solve their challenges and problems. Consider a situation that universities increase salaries of all the professors. Since all the professors in the universities are not expert and famous in their areas, universities waste their budgets. On the contrary, spending money for hiring more knowledgeable people will be more efficacious for enhancement of education.
In conclusion, contemplating all the mentioned reasons and points, I do belive that universities should spend more money on improvement of facilities and hiring more prestigious professors in order to improve the quality of education.
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- Extra 1 - Integrated writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...his regard, universities should provide a excellent condition for both students a...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent fashion" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ial equipment to perform their projects in an excellent fashion. In this case, facilities, such as high...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great research'.
Suggestion: great research
... are connected to the Internet for have a great research for their thesis. Besides, not only stu...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...t only students but also professors are enable to have a connection with other experts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47010869565 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10806849861 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2270579365 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.411764706 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247027338131 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992494522556 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823815116481 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195328509423 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645939568141 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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