Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Needless to say, in our modern and sophisticated world, young people definitely play the most significant roles in a country. Considering the major part of a country is composed of young individuals indicates that the crucial influence of them on the decisions and the future of society. However, many people believe that youngsters don't have a critical impact on the decisions in the country's destiny, others oppose this idea by paying attention to advantages of youthfulness for cooperating in social and political affairs. I totally agree with the later opinion for the following reasons.
To begin with, not only the future of a society directly depends on the quality of decisions but also attitudes of decision-makers toward issues. Thus, in order to decide about important topics, it is necessary to exploit the maximum potential of members of the society. Some characters of young adults such as agility, flexibility, risk-taking and so on, establish that they are appropriate ones to make a decision in the different and uncertain situations. They are free-minded to investigate all aspects of a problem and resolve it as soon as possible. Therefore, many positive and impressive properties of youngsters allow them to be influential decision-makers who impress the next generation by predicting the requirements of the future based on present trends.
Additionally, today a high percentage of young adults are educated individuals who are well-informed in specific fields like economics, politics and social studies. These expert people are key elements and precious treasure for a community which thrives for success. The country should apply young knowledgeable people for important positions in order to make plans based on precise data. This is the best method of appreciating talented ones who are human capitals of a country. My country is a compelling example of this. In my country, young educated people are overlooked in governmental positions which lead to migration of genius individuals from the country. Thus, if a society doesn't understand the value and the effective role of every single person on the prosper, it will lose the great opportunities of being successful.
In conclusion, considering all the reasons mentioned above, I firmly support the idea which young people should be influential ones in making vital decisions about various topics. Youngsters have the required capacity to make plans for the future and they also know the proper solutions for specific problems. Moreover, they are familiar with the trends and future needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38366336634 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0335539413 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.95260912 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.473684211 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23304667132 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653508763132 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465501964605 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141407601938 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372048954369 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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