Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
I am absolutely disagreed. Young people play an important role in a specific society and, they are the future of it. A fresh society is the youngest one, as the history has proved. Moreover, they affect social aspects directly and indirectly which is possible that some people overlook indirect effects. There are some reasons to support my idea as follows:
Today, humans' relationships are complex and, young people are the kernel of this complex society. For instance, parents try to find a good job for their youth; They have to contact different people to do that and, supply the platform like capital, certificates etc. Here, many contractions would be happen to arrange all steps; The authorities who are in charge of the steps, have a young child too and they can take those parents as an exemplary in making their child a hotshot. So, who is the main origin of this social interchanging? The young person. The young cause some events in a chain and, all resources in a country belong to them.
Changing the structure of the society is a paradigm of the direct influences as all people know that the role of youths in a community is indispensable. Were it not for young people, most of the famous revolutions or changes in the governments would not be happen. According to a well-known epic story, in which a king had 2 snakes on his shoulders; To feed these evil animals, he had to sacrifice a young man daily and exteract his brain as the food. It can be obviously inferred from it, that if a government or a cruel king is to fortify the piles of the kingdom, should make the young unconcious. For example, young people could dictate their desire to the authority by civic refusing and breaking civic trends.
Of course, the influence of young people might decrease in some communities but, it does not mean that we can generalize it to other countries or state that there are not any influences.
All in all, I am disagreed with the statement because, there are several crucial effects which are caused by young people. Not only they are the hope of the society, but also they can narrate their own story in this world.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO 53 3
- Are parents the best teachers? 90
- Why go to university? 3
- TPO 33-integrated writing task 68
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67553191489 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59861521607 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6089233866 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200515513043 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606149734556 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504919849278 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104714746569 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162622124267 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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