Watching movies is one of the most enjoyable thing we do in our spare times. There are many kinds of movies namely, Sci-Fi, horror, comedy, romantic, historical, biography, war, action, and so on. There must be reasons that there are various types of movies and for this reason I disagree with the statement of watching movies that can teach us something about real life carries importance. My reasons are explained in the next paragraphs.
Firstly, people watches movies to have fun, to learn something, to get excited, to cry, to laugh or another personal reason. Therefore, the film industry have been developing for a long time to compass this requirements. If a movie satisfies one, then I assume that the movie and the people involved to make it accomplished the task of giving what the audience want. The significance of the movies is not happening because of its themes and stories since we do not have to watch only the movies that teaches things about daily life. So, our choose depend on our mood and desires. Furthermore, there are many online film platforms in order to provide the service of finding any kinds of films. Hence, it is easier to reach films that we like to watch.
Secondly, there are actors and actresses graduated from acting schools and they move forward in different branches of acting. Every single player have their own desire and ability of playing the role they are good at and this area can not be the same for all of them. Moreover, the film industry and the watchers needs actors and actresses who are the best at their job. Because, only with that way the movies can become worth watching and again I would like to remark the opinion of we do not have to watch a single kind of movie since many of them are worth watching.
Thirdly, and personally, I like to watch the movies which are able to teach me things about real life, too. However, I do not prefer to watch these kinds of movies repeatedly. Because, I believe that if a person watches these types of movies constantly, then the impression and effect of the movie may starts to disappear and vanish away in time. To save the feeling fresh, it is important to keep the frequency of watching these movies. Then, the impact of the movie can be understood more efficiently and keeps its significance.
As a conclusion, we can watch any kind of movies according to our mood and that is why the film industry is exist. Therefore, I do not agree with the notion of watching movies that can teach about daily life is only worth watching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to depend'
Suggestion: to depend
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6570155902 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44659426203 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492204899777 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8179841893 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0454545455 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324574052391 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093892840876 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132668908212 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211963476578 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925810117153 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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