do you agree or disagree? if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying?
Since the beginning of the last century, the concept of choosing a job has been brought to public attention. Some people believe that if they have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in this belief. From a personal perspective, the former point of view carries more weight; given that working has a positive impact on people's personality, experience, and financial support. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, provided that people start to work any job, they could gain a variety of skills. A Vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is in Canada there are lots of people immigrated from the developing countries, such as Ethiopia, China and Indonesia hoping in a better life, they start their life by working any job, not only to earn money; but also, to improve their personality. To put it in another way, they have been exposed to a new culture; hence, they should work to enhance their experience, such as language skills, social skill and working under pressure. Consequently, getting a job even not the dreamed one is imperative for some people to complete their life.
Next, coupled with proper skills, experience is another benefit of having a job. For instance, technological engineers in Silicon Valley start their practical life as employees in a teamwork; by the time they could gain experience and take manager positions; furthermore, during this time they can take courses to keep themselves updated with any new technological inventions. To that end, working can add to people's experience and help them to promote to better positions with better salaries. Therefore, having a job is significant.
One final point, life has become very expensive, which enforces people to work. A recent survey conducted by the National Association of Finance in California found that not only the rents and prices of houses have been increased recently; but also, the prices of goods such as groceries and clothes. Thus, nobody can afford to live without working. As a result, with this high cost of living it better for people to have a secure job than waiting for an interesting one.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, having a job has crucial benefits and underestimating the importance of these benefits in our life is not logical. It is suggested that people compromise and ensure to achieve satisfying/secure career balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ntions. To that end, working can add to peoples experience and help them to promote to ...
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Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...esult, with this high cost of living it better for people to have a secure job than wa...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hieve satisfying/secure career balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04513064133 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80941901097 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55106888361 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3550009434 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328493047783 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103890381452 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882195073397 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179839875528 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485286365353 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.