Do you agree or disagree? It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago.
There is no doubt that nearly all of us will make a family in our life span, and having kids is one of the inevitable results of this behavior. Raising a child in this sophisticated world where we live is a matter of debate. While many people believe that nurturing a baby and raising a child is easier now than past, some others, like me, think it has more difficulties nowadays rather than past. I aptly substantiate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, nowadays parents’ expectation of their children and their willing are elevated. I mean, because of the advancement in technology and increasing access to information through this technology flow, people want the best of everything for their kids. Folks are trying to prepare all demanding conditions such as equipments and services for children to guarantee their success in the future. As an example, I can recall when I was a sixteen-year young man my mother bought the first home-computer for me, although I could not work with that very well. My father suffered to pay some part of that cost. In the past,t in contrast, children did not want expensive dolls or other equipment, and parents easily could afford children’s needs. These new demands put many financial burden on parents, which were not in the 50 years ago.
Secondly, growing of population and limited resources and services have made a competition for adults who want to raise a child nowadays. Parents should work around the clock to earn money to afford all child’s needs. Then, they don’t have enough time to oversee kids. Nowadays, all children have their small gadgets such as smart-phone, smart-watch, laptop and computers. Parents should be careful because children have access to enormous data, which of course, many of them are not suitable for them. To put this in perspective, last year, my brother said that his young girl was playing a game in her laptop and suddenly some harmful advertisement popped on in the screen. She has become anxious after seeing some dangerous scene in that advertisement. These high-tech improvements have some bane in addition to boons for parents, which made parents worry about the raising children in the new information era.
In sum, I strongly believe that parents have more difficulties now rather than decades ago to raise a child properly. This is because there is more advanced technology which brings more risk for children and because people want to prepare all the best for children and many of the adults face enormous problems in this way. You've just installed the ProWritingAid Extension which allows you to use our powerful style and grammar checks everywhere you write online. We've added some errors to the text below so you can test out the extension and fix them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: We've
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i mean, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95289079229 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67365655958 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54817987152 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9354982246 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.565217391 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3043478261 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26661012651 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648023585713 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472083952537 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154602258894 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394816710794 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r children to guarantee their success in the future. As an example, I can recall ...
^^
Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
... pay some part of that cost. In the past,t in contrast, children did not want expe...
^^
Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
...lts face enormous problems in this way. Youve just installed the ProWritingAid Extens...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: We've
...mar checks everywhere you write online. Weve added some errors to the text below so ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i mean, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95289079229 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67365655958 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54817987152 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9354982246 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.565217391 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3043478261 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26661012651 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648023585713 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472083952537 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154602258894 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394816710794 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.