Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago.
I agree with the following statement. In my view it is much easier to raise children now than 50 years ago and I feel this way for some reasons.
Firstly, it is much easier to raise children now because there is no lack of products and cloth. children have a big choice of different types of anything. To illustrate this I would like to share experience of my grandmother. when she use to be a child in USSR there was a dig problem with products and cloth. because of deficit people must stay in big lines to buy something vital. this problem really complicated people life’s. but now situation is changed and life become better.
Secondly, today there are a lot of kindergartens, educational classes and sport sections for children and their parents easily can work as long as they need without worrying about children. my granddad’s experience is a compelling example of the fact that now it is much easier to raise children than then. when he use to be a child, his parents worked hard a lot of hours and he stayed at home. it was boring and my granddad went outside with his friends, they played on unfinished buildings with building materials and it was very dangerous, they even could die or hurt themselves. but now, when parents work , they take away their children to different sections or courses and there is no any danger.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is more advantageous to raise children now than 50 years ago. Moreover there are a lot of sport sections and educational courses and products and cloth are not in deficit. taking everything into consideration, people should appreciate what opportunities they have now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80139372822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80437784687 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1393109638 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0588235294 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304253796287 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971802435835 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112892073266 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221655484234 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147113262119 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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