Do you agree or disagree that job has greater effect on your overall happiness than social life?
Nowadays, no one can ever deny that happiness is one of the most essential parts of the people’s life; thus, when it comes to the issue of the things which more effects on our happiness, some people may believe job has more influence on happiness than the social life does, and give some sound reasons for their opinion; however, others might have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, I believe job has more effects on our happiness because of several reasons. In what follows, to assert my point of view, I will elaborate two of which.
The first and foremost reason that comes to my mind is in general, people should allocate about eight hours per day and also five days per week on their job; therefore, the office hours play a significant role in our life and obviously, have some undeniable effects in our daily life. In this case, my own experience indicates some effects of my ex-job on my life. Three years ago, I was hired in a well-known company as a process control engineer, and because of high responsibilities, my position was so stressful. Each day as I was coming home after more than an hour driving, I was pretty tired that I was couldn’t socialize with my family members, except the weekends, but as I have picked the new job which is less stressful and near my home, I can spend more time with my family and it makes me happier than the past.
The second reason that I would like to put my finger on is we should pay as we go. Let me put it in another way, the things that make people happy are their habits and entertainments such as traveling, going to clubs, restaurants, cafes with their family or friends and for which of them they should spend money, as a result, if they want more fun, they should have sufficient salary that supports the different aspects of their life. To illustrate, consider that you have to choose a job with a high amount of salary that allows you to buy everything you want and go anywhere you want to go, or a job with a low salary that supports your home rental cost and your daily needs. Which one do you prefer? Should anyone choose the second one? In one word, a part of our happiness is depended on our job’s salary.
To make a long story short, job hours are a considerable part of our daily life and what happens during this period would affect the other part of our life as well. And one more thing, the amount of salary allows people to use facilities and have their favorite habits and entertainments. As a result, with all this taken into account, I do believe that finding a good job will have conspicuous effects on our happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44791666667 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45362455105 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485416666667 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.383767506 48.9658058833 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.4375 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226312321292 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769873306942 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619993325663 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143308939856 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307956425249 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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