do you agree or disagree? living beside our extended family is more important in the past than it is today?
Since the beginning of the last century, our society has become very mobile. Some people hold the view that living besides our relatives is not important, however there is a solid body of opinion that casts doubts on these beliefs. From a personal perspective, I believe that living nearby our extended family is important nowadays than ever before given that our family can provide us with support, sense of security, and traditions. Below I will strive my supporting points in more details.
Firstly, the cost of living has become very high which makes both parents work to earn more money to support their family. Provided that they live besides their relatives, they can provide them with help and support. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent survey conducted by Oxford university found that, people who live beside their extended family are happier and more productive than those who live away from their relatives. Not only because family can provide support and encouragement, but also assist with childcare giving parents much-needed break. Consequently, living beside family is a blessing.
Next, coupled with supportive, sense of security is another reason for the importance of extended family. Provided that there is any sort of emergency, our nearby relatives can help. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on what was elaborated is the whole family in Egypt live in the same house with a layout gives each member of the family the privacy which build strong bonds throughout all generations. In addition to that, our family always loves us whatever who or what we achieved. Therefore, our family can give us the sense of real love.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only one available. In fact, there is another subtle point must be born in mind. Extended family is very important to pass on values and tradition throughout all generations.
Taking everything into a considerations, without a doubt extended family is very important today then it was in the past underestimating these benefits is not logical. It is suggested that people compromise to ensure that they achieve work/family life balance, placing more importance on family relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13709677419 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7250733357 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0910726972 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.578947368 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335444151126 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101905487016 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711975107702 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186408043773 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067578125439 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.