do you agree or disagree people today spend too much time doing things they like to do rather than doing thing than doing things they should do?
Since the beginning of the last century, our world has become more advance than before. Although there is a variety of entertainment, people nowadays could not enjoy this advanced technology. However, this is a solid body of opinion that casts doubt on these beliefs. From my personal point of view, people today spend too much time doing thing they should do rather than doing things they have to given that life today is so competitive, stressful, and expensive. Below I ill strive to explain my supporting points in more details.
The foremost point, life today has become so expensive which enforces people to work more. A survey conducted by the National Association of Finance in California found that many people today want to work full-time rather than part-time. Moreover, "provided that" people work 40 hours a week, they will not have extra time for enjoyment. Consequently, the high cost of living obligates people to work more.
Coupled with the expensive standing of living , the stress is another reason why people spend more time doing things. For example, in the industrial developed countries such as USA and Canada , both parents in a family are under severs stress not only because they both should work as hard as they can, but also they have lots of responsibilities such as taking care of their kids, paying a mortgage, and doing grocery shopping. Therefore, people today under plenty of stress, they hardly find extra time for relax or enjoy.
One final point, the job market has ben so competitive. For example, the software engineers in the Silicon Valley should take courses in their free time in order to keep themselves updated with the current technological inventions. Furthermore, provided that people want to get a good job, they should be constantly studying. I believe in the famous proverb which states “time is greater than gold in term of value”. As a result, to be qualified professionals in this competitive market, people do not have extra time for enjoyment.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt people today spend their time doing things they should do. It is suggested that people compromise and ensure that they achieve responsibility/enjoyment life balance.
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...a mortgage, and doing grocery shopping. Provided that parents have extra time they prefer to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06835443038 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83862218135 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4825870009 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8095238095 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403522220407 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109710808463 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159086515971 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25399433463 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119790273237 0.0645574589148 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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