Do you agree or disagree? Rather than help children
With their schoolwork, parents should encourage their children do their work independently.
In this competitive society, the parents pay more attention to educate their children. Some people claim that parents should let their children to do their school work by themselves. However, I think parents should help children to do their school work, because it can strengthen the relationship between parents and children, help children have better thinking skills, and form good habits in study.
First, helping children to do their school work could strengthen the relationship between parents and children. It is because children can have more chance to communicate with their parents. Accordingly, they can be more familiar with each other. Such as my sister Cindy, her work was very busy and she didn't has time to communicate with her daughter. She even didn't know what subjects her daughter was studying. Accordingly, her daughter didn't like stay with her. When she realized this problem, my sister began to do homework with her daughter. In this process, she knew her daughter's interests and drawbacks, and her daughter was closer to her now. We can conclude that the parents will have better relationship with their children if they help children to do their school work.
Second, helping children to do their school work could help children have better thinking skill. If parents do children's school work together, they can give a lot of suggestions so that the children can think in different ways. Taking the example of myself. Take me as an example, I once had a problem of my writing homework when I'm in the primary school. The topic was so abstract for me so that I didn't know how to write. My mother taught me how to think in different perspectives and gave me a lot of advice. I finally wrote a good article which was praised by my teacher. It is obvious that parents can promote the children's thinking skills by helping children to do their school work.
Finally, the helping children to do their school work could help children form good habits in study. Children can't concentrate on study for a long time, but parents can supervise their children when they are doing their school work. I still remember my cousin, he always watching TV when he doing his homework. It's not efficient to finish the homework. So he used to complete his homework in the midnight. When my aunt found this problem, she asked him that he could watch cartoon program only when he finished his homework. After that, my cousin didn't do his homework until the midnight. And this can help him pay more attention to his study because he want to watch TV. That's why help children to do their schoolwork could help children form good studying habits.
In a nutshell, help children to do their school work can strengthen the relationship between parents and children, help children have better thinking skills, and form good habits in study. Therefore, parents should help their children to do their school work.
- Do you agree or disagree Rather than help children With their schoolwork parents should encourage their children do their work independently 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Rather than help children with their homework parents should encourage their children to do their work independently 77
- Do you agree or disagree Rather than help children With their schoolwork parents should encourage their children do their work independently 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50523636566 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392712550607 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8486483908 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8387096774 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.935483871 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1935483871 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471379210477 0.236089414692 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17870801272 0.076458572812 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190074965795 0.0737576698707 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36951861406 0.150856017488 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10888654315 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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