Do you agree or disagree?
Because the modern life is more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays modern world bring about complexity in our daily life and all people have to deal with inherently difficulty of modern sociaty. In this regret, I have to admit that I totally agree with the statement of young people have to the ability of management and organize . There are several points to justify my idea. Firstly, companies searching for young people who have ability of management and organization. Secondly, by this abilities young people also could manage their personal life. I will elaborate my reasons and try to shed some light on my perspective through ample examples.
The first reason come to mind is that, nowadays companies serching for young people who are not only profassion on their field, but also they searching for people with ability of management. The example of my brother could clarify my view. He is a talented boy with computer programming skills, however, he could not plan for his projects and waste a greate deal of time every day. To make a long story short, after some days working in company, his boss fired him from the job. As this example demonstrate, the ability of organizing could pave the path for job opportunity, without the ability of planning, our knowlenge seems to be useless.
From another aspect organizing and planning also play a vital role in people personal life. My personal anecdote will well demonstrate this point of view. Several years ago, I had to work all days and I could not spend most of the time with my family. My wife became angry to me and wants devorce, because I could not organize my time and I had no plan for my future. Finally, I learned management and devised a plan for our future. The example above could reveal the importance of planning in our personal life.
Taken all aspect mentioned above into consideration I pretty convined that the ability to plan and organize are highly important especially for young people due to the fact that this ability pave the path for better job opportunity, furthermore, these ability helps people to manage their personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this ability' or 'these abilities'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86324786325 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56419233323 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501424501425 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8084648619 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288000425945 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968344349106 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849383826087 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197060555705 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717216075246 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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