Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that young people have more effort to make decisions about their own lives. Because children growing condition is very different from which young people had in the past. Contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that today young people are still so depended to their parents about important decisions. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them and today young people are better able to make a decision about their own lives.
First and foremost, today the methods of training at home and education in school prepare children for independent decision making in future. Now children's ideas are listening seriously by parents and teachers. Therefore, they obtain courage to make a decision for own lives. But in the past, any children's opinion strongly suppressed by adults. For example, my grandmother says that when she was young, her parents never do involve her in any decisions for the family or even for herself.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration today most people between the age of 20 to 30, be separated from their family through study or getting a job in another city. When people experienced physical far, they unintentionally obtain some abilities. For example, they should cooking, buying, managing and making decisions by themselves. For instance, when I was 22 I went to Isfahan for academic study. I was really worried about choosing a roommate, but I had to decide alone because my parents were not around.
Finally, yet importantly, today young people have access to more information resources. Development in technology and social networks connected all people around the world together. However, in the past young people just meet very few people and they had traveled to other areas rarely. It led to they did not achieve the principal background knowledge for decision making, so they were more confident to left this task to their parents.
On the basis of reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that today young people are more able to make decisions about own lives than young ones in the past. Because they prepare by family and society for independent decision making, society pushes us forward to do it and we have obtained the required background knowledge to do it.
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- TPO 20 76
- TPO 47- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 63
- TPO44-Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are relate 80
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o make decisions about their own lives. Because children growing condition is very diff...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...hildren for independent decision making in future. Now childrens ideas are listening seri...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...le and they had traveled to other areas rarely. It led to they did not achieve the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05289672544 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5684272833 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8333302354 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.585960707739 0.236089414692 248% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16959201605 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165249462124 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328479136724 0.150856017488 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174381027138 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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