By large, it is established beyond doubt that friendship plays an imperative role in human’s life because it brings about conditions for socialization and self-actualization of individuals. Some people may have an opinion that people learn from their friends beside them freely. However, others may believe in contrasting standpoints. From my vantage point, I myself possess the conviction that close friends have a high impact on the process of learning. There are numerous reasons two of which I will cogently illuminate in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point is that there is no generation gap between friends, so they can perceive each other easily. In addition, they have mutual interests as well as they can participate in friends’ action, which leads to brush up their skills. Hardly are people impressed by their parents’ suggestion or desires. Moreover, adults have some ideas that are outdated and not compatible with values of modern generations. Take a personal experience as an example, I wanted to learn France two years ago, but I did not have any friends for practicing that accelerates my learning speed. So, I surfed the internet and found a boy which was the same age as me. We initiated our practicing and after some months, I could get acquainted with the ins and outs of the French. Based on research conducted recently in the University of Tehran, all students have preferred to participate in activities that all the members have same age since they can make friends. If they make a friendship bond, they can have a suitable impact on each other.
The second point that deserves some words here is that trust is a key factor in friendship found in close relationships. Friends can trust each other and share their secrets easily as well as get response which calms them down. When they trust each other, they think all the actions that their friends do is worthwhile. Indeed, they try to imitate these things and learn the procedures. The more trust between people, the more impact on people’s action. For instance, I worked for a commercial company two years ago and I got acquainted with new people. During my working hours, I watched my co-workers who were using state-of-the-art technologies which were far-fetched to my insight. So I tried to learn the instructions effortlessly and finally, I reached my goal since I found them reliable for learning. In addition, I thought that they could conquer the difficulties of learning of working with cutting-edge instruments, so I could triumph too. I retrospect, Had I have an opportunity to go back to my past, I would make more bonds with my same age people because they have a strong effect in shaping my knowledge as well as behavior.
To wrap it up, all the enumerated reasons converge to the point that close friendship has an important impact on the process of learning. Therefore, I highly suggested that all people should make more relationships which leads to socialize with new individuals, that is very crucial for learning. However, this is a story in a nutshell; actually, there are many reasons challenging the claim which is not mentioned above.
- Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child(5-10 years old)? 1. being helpful2. being honest3. being well organize 73
- Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer 62
- If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?1. Find a roommate to share a room2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently3. Buy che 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Hardly
..., which leads to brush up their skills. Hardly are people impressed by their parents'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2653.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03415559772 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96080613602 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506641366224 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 798.3 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5216078579 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2592592593 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5185185185 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114082279838 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344271358412 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563917060035 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763965928498 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503970220629 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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