By and large, it is established beyond that reducing living expenses becomes an imperative issue. In addition, economic crisis kindles this problem and many people cannot conquer to this arduous situation. A controversial issue which is often regarding this claim is that how individuals can decline their living expenditures. From my vantage point, I myself possess the conviction that not buying the latest mobile phone as well as buying new technological devices less frequently can reduce the living expenses. There are numerous reasons two of which I will cogently elucidate in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point is that buying new devices less frequently brings about a condition that a person can utilize properly since new technological devices have some features which individuals can do many tasks on them. In past, people should buy different devices for doing different tasks, but nowadays, all devices are compacted to a single appliance. If people want to making call or typing their articles, they can use new devices which are portable and low weight as well as have high speed that people can implement their projects efficiently in a glance. In addition, individuals can read books in new devices easily without any harm to their health since these devices have some features that people can adjust the light of the screen, so it is not necessary to buy paper books which are expensive. The more state-of-the-art-technologies you buy, the more benefits you can earn which leads to decline your expenditures. I have a conceiving experience related to this issue. I wanted to buy a new cell phone which had many options that deceived me. I decided to get a consulting from my mother because she had many logical reasons which persuaded me. She stated that you would be able to buy a tablet which is more practical and you could decrease your expenses by avoiding laptop, mobile phone, or book-reader. But I neglected to her advice and bought cutting-edge mobile phone which was very expensive and after that I obliged to buy laptop as well as paper books for studying which put a lot pressure on me. Had I have had an opportunity to go back, I would do my mother’s suggestion.
The second point that deserves some words here is that modern devices have some features which are beneficial for socializing since you can make new friends and strengthen your bonds with other people. This provokes a situation that individuals can get acquainted with new people and take advises from them to reduce their expenses. Moreover, they can find reliable people and borrow money from them, or get a roommate to share the expenses of living. Not only do they make new friends, but also they reduce the living expenditures by finding a roommate. For instance, I was familiar with a person two years and we got to be a roommate. We could share our expenses perfectly and took advices from each other. We are friends now.
To wrap it up, all the enumerated reasons converge to the point that buying new technological devices less frequently can decrease living expenditures a lot because it gives opportunities to making new friends and using compressed devices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
... individuals can do many tasks on them. In past, people should buy different devices fo...
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Line 2, column 1062, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hich had many options that deceived me. I decided to get a consulting from my mot...
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Line 2, column 1530, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...g which put a lot pressure on me. Had I have had an opportunity to go back, I would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98874296435 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89970958958 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472795497186 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5383257853 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.791666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2083333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378049306777 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107416984492 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830908017397 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227332566796 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566060234604 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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