Do you spend money or save them?
Admittedly, money is vital for people to live. However, different people hold s different view on spending money. some believe that living the moment is better than caring about the future, such as traveling for enjoying life. while others think that saving money for future use is more satisfying than squatter it for enjoying. In my opinion, not only worried about the future, but also enjoying the moment is equally important for life.
First of all, save money for future is necessary for us to live. Given the many spending items, such as children education, medical fee, daily use fee, and so on, saving money could give us satisfy for the future. none of us could know what would happen in the future, we must prepare as well as possible for it to secure. For example, my senior sister, who worked for a small company, never have chance to go abroad. but this year, there was a meeting hold in American, and she was the only one be selected to participant. Not only because she have a smooth speaking English, but also she could pay for the meeting fee. since my sister have the habit that save money in usually daily life. Considering none of us have capable to see what would happen in the future, it would be useful for us to save money for future use.
On the other hand, spending money is all essence for our life. since the competitive society, everyone underwent the pressure of life. it is crucial for us to learn enjoy the life, such as spending money for traveling. When you have travel with your family or friends, not only could you broaden your knowledge about scenery, but also can learn more knowledge about the city and culture. Plus, have a travel could also share a happiness time with friends and family, which would be the valuable memory for yourself. Moreover, you could also take some photos with family. Furthermore, it also would be a good chance for us to make new friends, and communicate with the rural person, learn the local cultural. All above could not get through other ways, and cannot exchanged by others. so, it would be worth to spend money.
As I mentioned above, in my opinion, saving money is equally crucial as the spending money. we save money for the future better life, while we spending money for enjoying the moment life. Both of them are crucial for our better living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65617433414 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22986252381 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469733656174 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0349148629 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.92 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.52 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232241004829 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857200782869 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849581806319 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179283955041 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830097625372 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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