Do you spend money or save them?
In the progressive world where we live, people work hard in their fields to gain money. They have different impulses for their efforts. Some people believe that they should save money for their future goals or emergencies. Others stand on the other side, believing that people should live the moment and enjoy it. Personally speaking, I agree with the first group more than the second one. I will explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
In the first place, I should mention that I believe that money should serve people, not people serving money. But it is necessary to know that money plays a crucial role in our life. With money, we can achieve various other valuable things. For example, a rich person can help poor people. So, money is important but more important than that is the approach you spend it. The most important priority for all human beings is fundamental needs: including food, cloth, and shelter. Everybody should have them and take attention to these essential needs. The extra money you have should pay on in your interest. The other crucial note there is, have you enough money for your favorites? Everyone has a limited budget and should have a good plan for that. A realistic and good plan should both be reasonable and easing to reach dream goals. Most of the time, in these plans, we should save money in a long time, hoping to approach our purposes. These purposes could be buying a beautiful giant house, an automaton car, or even a mobile phone. I prefer to buy a gorgeous house in the future instead of buying a small apartment today. Although I can not benefit my money right now, I will be happy with the hope of that pretty house and enjoy the way I am going to receive it. And I think it is beautiful.
Furthermore, in my opinion, in life, there are some important objects that the power of us should be spending on them. The temporary enjoyments are not worthy enough to deprive us of great pleasures. We can spend our time, energy, and money on some mediate things such as anticipate on a concert, go to travel, buy a piece of sumptuous jewelry. Or we can wait and save our power to hold a concert, go on a journey, and establish a jewelry exhibition. I am young enough to can have these dreams. And
I am very motivated to have these dreams. Also, I am wise enough to design a workable plan to receive these dreams.
All in all, I believe that we should pass on the temporary enjoyment to reach permanent pleasure. We should account for every minute and every penny we pay in our life. In this way, we will be responsible for the future and do not will old like a loser. We should take attention to essential thongs in life and enjoy the route more than the goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ung enough to can have these dreams. And I am very motivated to have these dreams...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51724137931 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36919440648 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478701825558 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9405267382 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4848484848 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9393939394 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207375437202 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481389869527 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613834467915 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918023653626 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804159741946 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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