Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes On the other hand some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced would you support or

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...y points and reasons of support. First, having market near house can decrease y...
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Suggestion:
... of support. First, having market near house can decrease your travelling becau...
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Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ust ten min far it is really fascinating . Now i can buy anything at any time, as ...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... min far it is really fascinating . Now i can buy anything at any time, as it hav...
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Line 2, column 611, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...idates that to have a centre nearby you is worth is Second, for ladies it is th...
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... to have a centre nearby you is worth is Second, for ladies it is the best outin...
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... centre nearby you is worth is Second, for ladies it is the best outing and a s...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... to hang out with friends, so the women who are house wifes get very little time of enj...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...w me to on go on shopping with my friend but i get to know their is a shops in my...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...o on go on shopping with my friend but i get to know their is a shops in my circ...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...pping with my friend but i get to know their is a shops in my circle I told my mom a...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a shop' or simply 'shops'?
Suggestion: a shop; shops
...h my friend but i get to know their is a shops in my circle I told my mom and now i ca...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hops in my circle I told my mom and now i can hangout with my friends. To wrap u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an hangout with my friends. To wrap up, after the announcement of opening a shop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27046263345 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42583258889 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9942126346 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124319042507 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554994619764 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509594127595 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921179171914 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494302711475 0.0645574589148 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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