Education is a crucial thing in our life. Good education, perfect future job. Teachers are an essential part of learning process. Whether teachers now days less respected by students than in the past or the opposite. This can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that teachers are more respective by students than today. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, in the past the only thing that students rely on it to understand topic is by attending school. The teachers are suitable person how can learn and explain subjects to the young people, therefore, all students in that time respect their teachers and obey their direction inorder to get a high score and improve their academic achievement. As opposite now days there are many ways that enable students to learn and educate themselves. With the improvement of technology, computer and smart phone anyone can use them to verify any think they want to understand. This is example from my real life, my son can use internet with his computer and go to the Google or you tube to figure out any information or knowledge. These materials would decrease the student demand on teachers for learning process.
Furthermore, in the past, people have more social communication than right now. Student may meet their teacher everywhere, and may engage in their private life. In addition, teachers respect consider as a traditional manner in the society. Teacher should be respect like parents. For instance, my grand ba, said that, he was very excited when he saw their teacher in the street and say hi to them. But for me if I meet my teacher one time by accident, I do not care, and no really excited like my grandfather did before
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. This based on the previous exposition that I mentioned above. Teachers are more respective in the past than these days. This is mainly due to the fact that, now days there are a lot of ways help in learning like internet and TV. Moreover, in the past teachers respected is traditional like parent respect.
Education is a crucial thing in our life. Good education, perfect future job. Teachers are an essential part of learning process. Whether teachers now days less respected by students than in the past or the opposite. This can be weighted in many aspects. In my perspective, I concur with the statement that teachers are more respective by students than today. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reason to explain my point of view.
First, and foremost, in the past the only thing that students rely on it to understand topic is by attending school. The teachers are suitable person how can learn and explain subjects to the young people, therefore, all students in that time respect their teachers and obey their direction inorder to get a high score and improve their academic achievement. As opposite now days there are many ways that enable students to learn and educate themselves. With the improvement of technology, computer and smart phone anyone can use them to verify any think they want to understand. This is example from my real life, my son can use internet with his computer and go to the Google or you tube to figure out any information or knowledge. These materials would decrease the student demand on teachers for learning process.
Furthermore, in the past, people have more social communication than right now. Student may meet their teacher everywhere, and may engage in their private life. In addition, teachers respect consider as a traditional manner in the society. Teacher should be respect like parents. For instance, my grand ba, said that, he was very excited when he saw their teacher in the street and say hi to them. But for me if I meet my teacher one time by accident, I do not care, and no really excited like my grandfather did before
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. This based on the previous exposition that I mentioned above. Teachers are more respective in the past than these days. This is mainly due to the fact that, now days there are a lot of ways help in learning like internet and TV. Moreover, in the past teachers respected is traditional like parent respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...chers are an essential part of learning process. Whether teachers now days less respect...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le reason to explain my point of view. First, and foremost, in the past the onl...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...student demand on teachers for learning process. Furthermore, in the past, people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and on teachers for learning process. Furthermore, in the past, people have mo...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'respected'?
Suggestion: respected
...anner in the society. Teacher should be respect like parents. For instance, my grand ba...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...excited like my grandfather did before To sum up, the statement is as persuasiv...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...here are a lot of ways help in learning like internet and TV. Moreover, in the past ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78284182306 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63903674597 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544235924933 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9934226748 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5652173913 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47826086957 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.531589338134 0.236089414692 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153667064933 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101950175463 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338811086735 0.150856017488 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198874967406 0.0645574589148 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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