The passage and lecture are both disccusing posibility of concedering dinosaure as endotherms. The author claims three evidence to support dinosaures are endothermal reptiles. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She mentions, the reasons which are given in reading passage are incorrect.
First, the writer states, fossils dinosaur discovered in Polar Region, in this cold area only endothermal animal can withstand cold whether and lived there. This point is challenged by lecturer. She mentions, recently evidences indicate, dinosaurs live in area warmer than before. And dinosaure can rehabitatetheir region where they lived in cold time.
Second, the author points to dinosaurs legs position underneath its body like other enditherm animals,as opposit to crocodiles which have legs on side of their body. This argument is refutes by professor. She says, these legsto support more wieght of dinosaurs. not just for running. therefore this reason not indicates that dinosaurs as a endothderm animal.
Finally, the author claims, dinosaure bones have alot of haversain canal. This is maen they grow rapidly. The professor in the other handsays, these haversain present in bone of dinosaurs, but there are also growing rings in bone foosils. These rings indicate that dinosaurs grow in some period and stope growing in the other time. endothermal animals always grow rapidly.
The passage and lecture are both disccusing posibility of concedering dinosaure as endotherms. The author claims three evidence to support dinosaures are endothermal reptiles. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in the article. She mentions, the reasons which are given in reading passage are incorrect.
First, the writer states, fossils dinosaur discovered in Polar Region, in this cold area only endothermal animal can withstand cold whether and lived there. This point is challenged by lecturer. She mentions, recently evidences indicate, dinosaurs live in area warmer than before. And dinosaure can rehabitatetheir region where they lived in cold time.
Second, the author points to dinosaurs legs position underneath its body like other enditherm animals,as opposit to crocodiles which have legs on side of their body. This argument is refutes by professor. She says, these legsto support more wieght of dinosaurs. not just for running. therefore this reason not indicates that dinosaurs as a endothderm animal.
Finally, the author claims, dinosaure bones have alot of haversain canal. This is maen they grow rapidly. The professor in the other handsays, these haversain present in bone of dinosaurs, but there are also growing rings in bone foosils. These rings indicate that dinosaurs grow in some period and stope growing in the other time. endothermal animals always grow rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The passage and lecture are both disccus...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rt dinosaures are endothermal reptiles. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in t...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urs live in area warmer than before. And dinosaure can rehabitatetheir region whe...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...th its body like other enditherm animals,as opposit to crocodiles which have legs o...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...egsto support more wieght of dinosaurs. not just for running. therefore this reason...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ght of dinosaurs. not just for running. therefore this reason not indicates that dinosaur...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...ght of dinosaurs. not just for running. therefore this reason not indicates that dinosaur...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... reason not indicates that dinosaurs as a endothderm animal. Finally, the autho...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Endothermal
...od and stope growing in the other time. endothermal animals always grow rapidly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5023255814 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67252106596 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632558139535 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6906634542 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7222222222 110.228320801 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9444444444 21.698381199 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06452816374 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362209867981 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114092200548 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138575341931 0.0662205650399 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24930008009 0.162205337803 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258444016726 0.0443174109184 583% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.73 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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