Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it goes without saying that in today's sophisticated world, people have to engage with a lot of activities and skills in order to provide necessities for life. however, recently, there has been an active controversy among people about the very notion that whether we should take risks to attain a successful life or try to stay on our safe zone, doing what we know to do well. although it is slightly hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I personally adhere to the fact that it is more sensible to concentrate on a specific career for our entire life. The following paragraphs will elaborate more on this issue.
To start with, human’s mind is programmed to perform more efficiently when he tackle something several times. Put it in other words, the more we engage with some task, the more we master on its skills. A newly conducted research in some developing countries demonstrated that people who deal with a profession for more than ten years have better performances than the workers who are more likely to alter their jobs roughly each year. An example can drive this notion home. having graduated from high school, I worked for an enterprise for 5 years. there, owing to my extraordinary capability to write highly sophisticated letters, I became responsible of corresponding highly sensitive letters to other correlative companies. trying to concentrate on my duty to just write letters for the company instead of doing unrelated tasks, I became the major reference in a top-notch company whom all the company wanted to deal with. Had I not focused on one task, I would not have been able to reach such position among my co-workers.
In another point of view, someone who has a very risky character, never experience a safe stable life. however, this cannot generalized to the whole context, there are always some exceptions excluded from the general rule. it might bring an array of merits for a number of individuals, nonetheless for the majority of people, it will bring nothing but disaster. As an illustration consider the example of my older uncle. although he has a real talent in art and graphic design, he has never followed his true competence. Being a real adventurer and generalist, he was not able to choose a rightful field to work on. Therefore, he changed several jobs in 15 years from the rage of teaching, to engineering. but none could fulfill his desire. As a result, in the age of forty he gained noting noticeable comparing to his friends who chose a low risk and rewarding job which fit them and bring them a prosperous life. Had my uncle stayed in an acceptable job position, he would have had a prosperous job in the middle of his life.
In conclusion, drawing upon the aforementioned reasons, it not a sensible decision to try a multifarious careers in order to succeed. Not only can we master in a task by focusing on it, but also we can have a very prosperous and stable life, doing the things we know how to do well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76937984496 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78862097042 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0831207479 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.541666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14797704144 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342556357141 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584619799882 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110275175164 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685668517712 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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