In the modern fast-paced society, people and companies are in close competition to acquire the most prosperity in the job market. Therefore, they take different approaches to perform their duties and projects. In this regard, a moot point remains as whether doing jobs as fast as possible alongside with some risk to make mistakes or do them slowly without any mistake. Some have the mindset that acceleration is the first priority. Dissenting from the presented notion. I try to substantiate my opinion through the following paragraphs.
The first reason which deserves to be declared here is that some mistakes are irreparable. these blunders lead to completely destroy a mission or wipe out a company. A lot of companies all around the word that their policy was performing the tasks as soon as possible has bankrupted. A most famous instance in this regard is Ericsson mobile company as one of the preceding telecommunications corporations in Sweden which tried to be the forerunner in communication technology by submitting the newest discoveries as soon as possible has bankrupted due to a mistake in programming that was a huge bug in their software. Hence, the company forced to sell all its stocks to Sony corporation technology then completely disappeared from the competitive market.
Another reason which I am intended to point out here is that by doing the job slowly without taking any risk of making mistakes one's will work under a very low-stress condition. Hence, by decreasing the stress level of the job, a company or the manager could be sure about the mental and physical health of its employees. And this factor is a significant factor to led the corporation to success. Recently psychological department of Tehran University published an article which makes a comparison between the stress level of companies and their prosperity in their responsibilities. It revealed that the institutes which have a friendly environment and a small gap between the manager and the employees are the most successful companies in both financial conditions and marketing.
To wrap up, having analyzed the aforementioned ideas, one can deduce that by doing the tasks in patient and flawless is the best way to performing them. Because not only it reduces the chance of making irreparable blunders but also decreases the amount of stress in the working environment.
- Essay topics: TPO-23 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specifi 76
- tpo 24 independent writingAgree or disagree: one of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 90
- TPO 31 Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 73
- Tpo 31 Independent WritingBecause the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 80
- Tpo 15Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... is that some mistakes are irreparable. these blunders lead to completely destroy a m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16883116883 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07168088802 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0971517859 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967632697429 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271960773097 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427951174349 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616769456349 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270569969951 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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