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The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

For every goal that we have in life, we have to work hard towards achieving it, we have to put in consistent efforts every day so that we make ourselves capable enough to succeed. That being said, I agree with the expression "Never, never give up" to keep trying and never stop working towards your goals.

Human beings are complex creatures who have the capacity to feel emotions on a large spectrum, one day you are full of motivation and readily put the efforts in while the other one might feel low on motivation and fail to find the energy to keep going and work hard. But as they say "Rome wasn't built in a day", most significant achievements in a person's life are a result of consistent efforts put in by the individual over the years who like most human beings may have felt at some point in time this desire to give up. Still, instead, they choose to get over this feeling and push through lethargy and work hard to achieve success. To do this you must have a "Never give up" attitude and consistently put in the efforts necessary for success.

People who have achieved success in various walks of life all have one thing in common and that is consistency, they say it has been the most significant factor in determining their success. It is not extensive efforts taken over a short period but consistent actions taken every day, improving day by day, and building up the necessary skills along the way which helped them achieve what they wanted in life.

In my personal life too, what success I have had didn't come from a week of me giving it my all working non-stop, but from efforts that were taken and skills that were built over the years, years where I never gave up and kept striving towards my goal, which eventually helped me to get what I want and achieve my goals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...d work hard. But as they say 'Rome wasnt built in a day', most significant ...
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Line 3, column 358, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...os;, most significant achievements in a persons life are a result of consistent efforts...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hieve success. To do this you must have a 'Never give up' attitude and ...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...sonal life too, what success I have had didnt come from a week of me giving it my all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57798165138 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40996444487 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1876495823 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.6045352989 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189209224863 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987019647432 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140296315325 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123175170669 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103147608518 0.0645574589148 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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