The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. From Official Guide (6th edition), Topic 1
Facing challenges and failures in life poses a dilemma for one to ponder: whether to abandon the pursuit, or to continue. I agree with the notion that one must always strive for greatness regardless of the circumstances. This essay will outline the reasons supporting this view, including overcoming challenges, fostering personal growth, and providing inspiration and motivation.
To begin, perseverance enables individuals to conquer challenges that seem insurmountable. The rationale behind this is pushing through setbacks and difficulties fosters an unwavering determination and willingness to work persistently towards one’s goals. A concrete example of this is Marie Curie’s remarkable success story. Being a female scientist a male-dominated field, she stood against all the obstacles impeding her pursuit of scientific excellence, and made several groundbreaking discoveries which won her two Nobel Prizes. Despite all impediments she tenaciously pursued her work as a scientist demonstrating absolute resoluteness and relentless commitment to advancement of her field. This perfectly depicts the relationship between consistency and prevailing over hardships.
Additionally, embracing the ‘never give up’ mentality promotes personal development. When facing obstacles one must reflect upon the situation, learn from their mistakes, and adapt strategies to further their goals accordingly, which will lead to a transformative self-growth and the realization of their full potential. My own experience vividly exemplifies this. As a young musician I faced rejection on multiple occasions, yet that did not stop me from persevering, seeking constructing feedback, exploring new avenues, and ultimately making my dream of performing on a real stage come true. To be more precise, through persistent effort and a willingness to learn, I began to hone my skills so as to expand my musical abilities. This iterative process of reflection and adapting leads to achieving goals and experiencing profound self-development.
Finally, it can be argued that determination is a powerful source motivation not just for oneself, but also for others. Determination is potent wellspring, fueling personal drive and igniting a spark in others. Witnessing people fulfilling their aspirations often inspires others to embark on journeys of self-improvement of their own. Take Mahatma Gandhi, who has inspired many politicians and ordinary people from all over the world to champion the doctrines of nonviolent resistance, as an example. What is inspiring here is the example he set for others by fighting persistently for his cause, freedom, and his victory during India’s struggles for independence. As can be seen, this ripple effect of determination and willpower created a contagious spirit of ‘never giving up’ which still propels individuals to push through their limits and strive for greatness.
To conclude, I firmly believe that one must never stop aspiring to achieve what they desire. Finding ways around challenges and demands of life, maintaining and fostering a self-improvement attitude, and inspiring others are the three main reasons in favor of the stance. (Unrevised, 469 words)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 696, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ess to learn, I began to hone my skills so as to expand my musical abilities. This itera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2742.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8093220339 4.8611393121 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32086627699 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633474576271 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 826.2 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0739401976 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159323294709 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410236567612 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404681190769 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082862945114 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207147038425 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 10.9000537634 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 86.8835125448 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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