Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response
There have been several disputed discussions on whether you can learn about the culture of a country from watching its movies or not. As for everything, there are always two sides to every question. Personally, I believe that films play a very important role to learn about the country where they were made. I feel this for reasons, which I explore in the following essays.
First of all, films help the viewers to know about the laws and regulations followed in the country where movies are made. My personal experience is a compelling example of this; about 2 years ago, I watched the movie 13th reasons why. it helps me very much to understand the answer to the question i.e. how the criminal laws have proceeded in the United States of America. Therefore, Movies, as well as Tv shows, help us alot to understand the rules and regulations of the originated country.
Secondly, movies help the audience to know about the religion followed in the country where movies are made; moreover, it also helps to understand the culture adopted in the originated country. For better understanding let us look at the example of God heaven movie made In France; about 10 months back, I watched this movie and founded that France is a multi-cultural country. This movie showed that there is only one religion and that is humanity. Thus, it is not wrong to say that before traveling to a specific country, we should watch movies as well as tv shows of that specific country.
In Conclusion, although there are some scenarios where you cannot learn about a country from watching its movies such as minorities' problems etc. Nevertheless, these scenarios are very less. So, I am of the opinion that films help the viewers to learn about the originated country because most movies are made for the domestic audience and because they want to show the culture of originated country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8753894081 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59356973555 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498442367601 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.03880195 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398141291775 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136570295634 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120578279951 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268587625368 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07064110143 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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