Films can tell us a lot about in which they were made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
I support this idea that films can tell us a lot about where they made what have you learned about a country from watching its movies. I think that films are the best way of giving information about countries which we have not visited. I support this idea for three reasons including, showing sculptures and statues and streets, the face of people and color of skin, the brand of automobiles and cars, the lifestyle and method of living, behaviors, and characters of people who live in that country. History and culture of people, traditional foods and dresses ritual, religious, etc.
First of all, I believe that films can show history and culture and art in countries which are different and specific in countries, then we can know where and this film made.
Second, I have watched films to increase my knowledge and information about countries such as characters and manners, religious, art and architecture, technology and science. We can watch several different kinds of films in different genres, such as the genre of the family we can learn a lot about the relationship between parents and children and how they can spend their time together. For instance, in one film family want to go road trip which I have never known before that a road trip is a great opportunity to spend time as a family.
Third, on the one hand, films have been able to show a lot of historical events that happened in some places in the world which is useful for learning about the history of a country, however, these historical documents are not accepted by people who live in these countries. I have been always learning a lot of things from watching. I think that lots of information such as history, war, revolution, industrialization, agriculture, are shown by films. Then people can learn a lot from countries where they even didn’t visit before.
In conclusion, some of the most important points come into my mind including
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ut countries which we have not visited. I support this idea for three reasons inc...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...e, technology and science. We can watch several different kinds of films in different genres, suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84545454545 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72083583819 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506060606061 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6752600911 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414952056131 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147663653179 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153809367468 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201897511511 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120778570631 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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