Nowadays, global warming is one of the major issues of the whole world. There are several causes of global warming and we can also solve this problem by only taking strict actions which are given below.
Firstly, talking about the major cause of global warming. It is the emission of chlorofluorocarbons (CFCs), sulphur dioxide (SO2), nitrogen oxide(NO),and carbon dioxide (CO2) in environment. CFCs make holes in the ozone layer and others increase the global temperature of the earth. CFCs are emitted by refrigerators and air conditioners whereas others are emitted by vehicles and industries.
However, we can tackle this problem by taking a few steps. To reduce the emission of CFCs we can reduce the numbers of refrigerators and air conditioners in a specific area or by using another compound in place of a compound which emits more quantity of the CFCs. Such as we can use hydrofluorocarbons which contain no chlorine. For solving the problem of SO2, NO2, and CO2 gases. We can reduce the number of private vehicles and we can install the carbon and sulfur filter in chimneys of houses and industries.
Now, the other most important cause is cutting down the forest and burning up the paddy left after harvesting of crops. These both cause global warming by deforestation the percentage of CO2 is increasing and oxygen is decreasing in the atmosphere. Well by the burning of paddy air pollution and the quantity of CO2 in the environment also increases. To stoping this firstly we have to plant more and more trees on plain land and the main solution for the burning of the paddy is the dry distillation of paddy in absence of air by doing this we can get a large quantity of Methane Gas. This can be used for household works in place of LPG for cooking food and for various purposes in the house. It is also much efficient than any other measures for reducing it.
To conclude, as global warming is increasing day by day. So, we should have to take these measures to reduce it and get a better life for us and come and generations.
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 75
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 95
- more and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, whereas, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74438202247 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76557889974 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48595505618 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7021947449 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204076794631 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778297811941 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911071235353 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142233082543 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109722862842 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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