High salaries with high risks of losing a job or a secure job with a low salary
Currently, living in the society full with fierce competition, there is an increasing number of individuals facing the problem of choosing a suitable job. Some individuals reckon that jobs with higher salaries at the cost of high risks are their priorities, while others contend that the stability of jobs is the most significant factor they take into consideration when choosing a job. Personally speaking, I prefer the job with higher wages but more risky and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To start with, high wages contribute to improve my living standards. Nowadays, with the process of civilization, the consume is continuously upgrading, thus citizens are offered with multiple choices, which absolutely imposes a financial burdens on them. I am also one of individuals affected by the consume upgrade, therefore the high wage is the priority that I will factor into my decision. The research conducted to evaluate people’s propensity to accept a job with higher or lower salaries, 78% individuals contend that since salary is their solid foundation of living standards, they are willing to work in a well-paid job, even though the job is backbreaking or at a risk. The rest testers in the research indicate that they are not satisfied with their stable jobs for the sake of low income which fails to enable them to live in a high quality. This demonstrates that high salaries play an vital role in modern people’s lives.
What’s more, owing to the fierce competition existing in the society, the more challenges appear in job, the easily a employee can succeed. To be more specific, based on the well-developed economy, there are not sufficient opportunities for fresh graduates to make achievements. That is to say, aiming at achieving their dreams, risks are integral and indispensable component of the paths toward the successes. Meanwhile, opportunities are merely for those individuals with the awareness of taking risks, which indicates that higher risks render individuals with a easily successful opportunity. For instance, one of my best friend, Rebecca, entered a Fortune 500 after graduation at the cost of a long probation period. During the probation period, Rebecca was confronted with the risk of being fired. In contrast, Rebecca also enjoyed the specialty training offered by the organized enterprise, which enables Rebecca fully enhance her practical experience. After the evaluation at the end of the probation period, luckily, Rebecca obtained the position. Eventually, she is capable of making big deals with customers. This example illuminates that the job involving with risks tends to afford employees the chances of success.
Admittedly, it is comfortable and cosy for individuals to possess stable jobs, however, due the limit of low income, individuals fail to improve their living qualities. Nevertheless, although it is ardent to strike a balance between risks and salaries, this kind of job kills two birds with one stone.
In a nutshell, choosing a risky job with higher salaries is the optimal choice, since risks ensure our chances of achieving successes and well-paid jobs guarantee our living standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'burden'?
Suggestion: burden
...s, which absolutely imposes a financial burdens on them. I am also one of individuals a...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... integral and indispensable component of the paths toward the successes. Meanwhil...
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Suggestion: an
...at higher risks render individuals with a easily successful opportunity. For inst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast, kind of, to start with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29191321499 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95840367654 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 837.0 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1583135216 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.954545455 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0454545455 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22727272727 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42321936847 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121904078763 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964478833384 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258809367997 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104760169674 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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