Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.
Over the course of history, people have seen jobs as the fundamental part of everyone’s life. It both provides people with the money they need and the satisfaction that comes after knowing that you are useful. In this line of thought, given the options of working with more salary but limited number of holidays and more holidays but less salary, I would wholeheartedly go with the former. Two of my reasons will be elaborated below.
Firstly, decent salary can lead to a more quality vacation, despite being less often. Generally speaking, you need to have a packet full of money if you want to enjoy your holiday. This is because, there are a myriad of costs you have to afford. It ranges from airplane far to hotel reservation and rental cars. In this way, if you want your vacation to be as epic as possible, you ought to spend huge amount of money. That being said, if your job doesn’t provide you with the needed money, you can’t spend a quality time. Personally speaking, were I to choose between going on vacations so often but with limited budget and having holidays seldom but in a classy manner, I’d definitely choose the second option. Therefore, I’d rather my job consists of limited off days while I make more money whereby I am able to make the most out of a vacation. Having more money, I can spend 3 days in a six-star hotel and create an epic experience rather than spending six days in a three-star hotel with the minimum level of services.
Secondly, by saving more money, I may be able to start my own business after some years of working. No one denies the fact that in order for people to start their own business, they must possess huge amount of money. In addition to money, they also need to be experienced and be equipped with the necessary know-how of running a business. If I choose the job offering big amounts of money, I am able to save some. With the experience gained through all those years of working, I am able to start my own business. That way, not only am I able to make more money, I am also able to increase my days of vacation. This is because CEOs don’t necessarily need to be at work every day. They can manage their company with their phone. For example, I can be in a hotel in Qatar and, thanks to technology, telecommute. The point of this example can be encapsulated in this sentence: I can both earn more money and more days of vacation after some years of working if I choose a job with better salaries but fewer off days in the first place.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...r holiday. This is because, there are a myriad of costs you have to afford. It ranges ...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a classy manner" with adverb for "classy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d budget and having holidays seldom but in a classy manner, I’d definitely choose the second optio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48689956332 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43157048826 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478165938865 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1188307106 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.347826087 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9130434783 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2464963004 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715702734091 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670006402497 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191927172797 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039714978261 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...r holiday. This is because, there are a myriad of costs you have to afford. It ranges ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a classy manner" with adverb for "classy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d budget and having holidays seldom but in a classy manner, I’d definitely choose the second optio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48689956332 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43157048826 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478165938865 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1188307106 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.347826087 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9130434783 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2464963004 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715702734091 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670006402497 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191927172797 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039714978261 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.