How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
All of us have experienced the enjoyment of watching tv or movies have been made by the best and monyed companies of the world. Some people believe that television and movies we watch every day, week or month have not an important satus in our lives. However I think tv can convert us to another person because of the fact that can distort our life styles, characteristics, and our attitude to life.
One reason, watching television can adjust us to another person and change our behavior, because it change our lifestyles, In view of the fact that when you watch television all day long, and seldom do you move your body, and act like a lethargic person, and have no activity; you may get sick to disease like corpulence, fat liver and heart attack. with continuing this condition, it penetrates in your behavior, and changing it is formidable.
Another reason, the cause of always being near television, and watching television shows is not proper for people is that it can changes your personality. All of us have a favourite actress playing in popular television shows or movie making in Hollywood; also, you may have experienced that by passing the time, you are getting more and more similar to your favourite character; consequently, your style of talking, walking, and thinking which may be converted in time.
Most important reason, movies can reshape our conduct because it can infect us to psychological dieseas. There are many movies about the biography of eminent people living with full of money bank accounts, and these movies show that they are lavish people and spend money how much they want, so the consequences of this fact have undeniably effects on oridinary people; thus, normal people in social think that why they are not like them, or why they have not been born rich; consequently, they can get depressed, and this can be as a lethal weapon for a social.
No wonder, watching and, staring at television, can lead to misshaping of our manner and behavior which has sever outcomes like depression and disease on us, so people need to hold the portion of watching films In a equivalence with other affairs of their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ink tv can convert us to another person because of the fact that can distort our life styles, characteri...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...son and change our behavior, because it change our lifestyles, In view of the fact tha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...corpulence, fat liver and heart attack. with continuing this condition, it penetrate...
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Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being always
...able. Another reason, the cause of always being near television, and watching televisio...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...is not proper for people is that it can changes your personality. All of us have a favo...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91032608696 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65096528947 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.432090246 48.9658058833 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.7 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 20.6045352989 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168765054289 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766396203553 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395355085579 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961006977302 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353104478199 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.