There is no doubts that nowadays, education plays the key role in people's lives. No one can deny the direct and indirect effects of education. It is a no-brainer that well education can guide individuals
to the prosperity and success. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that the government should invest more money in the education. However, some others may take the opposite viewpoint and believe that
other areas such as health care or land exploration should be more invested. From my own perspective, the first belief is true. I hold this because of two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that well education affects directly or indirectly to other areas such as health care. It goes without saying that
to have acceptable health care, we should have educated doctors, as well as, sophisticated facilities to care diseases successfully and elevate the health level in the society. All of these are impossible
without a comprehensive education, so to have a progress in all areas, we should first have a sophisticate education system. To shed ligth on this issue, socialigists claim that the most key factor of devolopment
and progress in the South Korea is acceptable education system. They believe that this system helps South Korea to have a unbelieveable progress in other areas such as well-being, business, health care and so on.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that good education system increases public's general knowledge, which leads that they overseen more on the government. To have a responsive government, members of
society should have knowledge about their rights. People who are illitrate or unaware are more suceptible to have a tyrant government. As a case in point, what makes the South korea democratic and North Korea
dictatorship is their people's knowledge about their rights. Had North Korea had good education system, the government would not have become tyrant.
To make a lon story short, all the afformentioned above lead us to the conclusion that investing money in education system has a lot of benefits that outweight the benefits of investing in health care
or lan exploration because it affects all areas and esclates public awareness. All in all, it is anticipated that government pay more attention to education in the future because of it's momentous benefits.
- If the government wants to invest in the following three areas what do you think is the most worthwhile Land exploration Education Health care 82
- Children rely too much on the technology like computers smart phones video games for fun and entertainment Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children s development 73
- A city wants to help teachers of its high school students ages14 18 improve their teaching It is considering two plans Choose a small group of excellent teachers these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach e 73
- If the government wants to invest in the following three areas what do you think is the most worthwhile Land exploration Education Health care 73
- If the government wants to invest in the following three areas what do you think is the most worthwhile Land exploration Education Health care 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'There are no doubts'?
Suggestion: There are no doubts
There is no doubts that nowadays, education plays the key ...
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...hat well education can guide individuals to the prosperity and success. Some peop...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
...ng essay. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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...health care. It goes without saying that to have acceptable health care, we shoul...
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...the society. All of these are impossible without a comprehensive education, so to...
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...t a comprehensive education, so to have a progress in all areas, we should first have a so...
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... that the most key factor of devolopment and progress in the South Korea is accep...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
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...ve knowledge about their rights. People who are illitrate or unaware are more suceptibl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, so, well, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20854271357 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8511654575 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505025125628 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3867290124 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.105263158 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217104958323 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633040651566 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509322097739 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844209449061 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496120267602 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.