If you could go back to some time and place in the past when and where would you go Why Use specific reasons and details to support your choice

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is critically important when we remember the past and ocassionally analyze yourse...
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...ife, in particularly, about the past. So,theese people have this opinion because all o...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...,theese people have this opinion because all of us made a incorret choice or made...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
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...ve this opinion because all of us made a incorret choice or made a bad decision ...
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...ce in our life. My opinion, the past is an solemn part of our life. We should reme...
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Line 1, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , however
...d remember and analyze our live all time,however should not forget about the present.Des...
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...ver should not forget about the present.Despite of this fact, If I had a opportinity co...
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Suggestion: an
... present.Despite of this fact, If I had a opportinity come back the past, I would...
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Line 1, column 587, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have chosen' or 'choose'?
Suggestion: have chosen; choose
...opportinity come back the past, I would chosen the period of my time, where I was choo...
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Suggestion: It
...n the two thousand and seventeenth year.It was very complex period of my life.I n...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...and seventeenth year.It was very complex period of my life.I needed to pass my ex...
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....It was very complex period of my life.I needed to pass my exam and decided who ...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...of my study at school and I should have choose the university. I have choosen four sub...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
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Suggestion: an exam; exams
...en four subject which I want to pass as an exams. It was mathematics, Russian language, ...
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...r for my mathematics exam. Unfortunately,I had no money and I could not to study w...
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...ous and my score to the mathematics exam frustrated me and I got a very atrocious...
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...ll extra miles for my exam. So, If I had The time machine, I would have take a tu...
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Line 2, column 800, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: taken
...f I had The time machine, I would have take a tutor for my mathematics exam and I c...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
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Suggestion: an
... I don know what was in my mind. It was a experience, but it was so hurt for me. ...
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... it was so hurt for me. This person was a abuser and got at me every time when I ...
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Suggestion: When
...e every time when I did something wrong.When I broke up with him I was a very jubila...
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... broke up with him I was a very jubilant person and I felt freedom. Hence, I woul...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...erson and I felt freedom. Hence, I would prefer never meet this person or break u...
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...sible. In summary, If I had a chance to back the past, I would choose the two pe...
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...would choose the two periods of my life.Meanwhile, I always tell myself that I should n...
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... my life.Meanwhile, I always tell myself that I should never regret the past or ...
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...ile, I always tell myself that I should never regret the past or mistakes I made...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in particular, in summary, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24819277108 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64544514706 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8082174304 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9523809524 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7619047619 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971737942778 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313626445248 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343320861349 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716715884458 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242780939892 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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