Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.
There is no shortage of opinion on the government should eliminate problems with environmental in order to make better health of citizens. I believe that, the government is responsible for its people and can solve some troubles with ecosystem . I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, I think that government must implement the several taboo for factories and other enterprises. I guess this method can help to circumvent issues with environmental pollution. Additionally, I propose to all factories use the special filters, which can be useful and , for instance, aid to evade issues with pollution of water. I provide an example that to prove my personal point.
There are some factories in my city that produce meat and all the waste goes into the river. The water from this river all people use for personal needs and , consequently, this product is not good quality. if these farms use the filters, than pollution of water can be evaded. For this reason, the government may accept law for factories that forbid to shed all garbage into the river or use special cleaning instruments.Therefore, these restrictions help to people with their health.
Secondly, I believe that the government can emit laws for protecting nature and preventing pollution, so people and enterprises has not choice and they will be followed these rules. I think that the government could solve any problems with garbage, ecosystem and environmental in next way. The government will provide benefits to people if they are obeyed by rules. For example, if factory comply to laws , then the government can make less taxes or give another benefit.
In conclusion, I think the all rules and constraints help resolve problems with pollution. I strongly feel that people want to prevent pollution and do not want to disturb our planet, therefore they will do all for saving nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i guess, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05047318612 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90533476544 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517350157729 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9848697472 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239168692619 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084944039528 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765322108543 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149782198172 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899348520095 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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