If you have extra money, are you happier giving it to charity or spending it yourself?
Beyond a shadow of doubt, money is the main driving force of our lives. Without being financially stable, I cannot even imagine living. But still, we sometimes forget about the people who are deprived of this resource. In this regard, some people like to donate the extra amount of money they have, while others are inclined towards spending it on themselves. Certainly, I concur with the former opinion: it is important to give your extra money to poor and needy people. In the following paragraphs, I would like to delve into the reasons and examples to substantiate my viewpoint.
First, the remarkably potential reason is the feeling of satisfaction you would gain by donating money to people enduring hardships in their lives. To elucidate, by eliminating their problems, you will be helping them to live better and improved lives. This can be really satisfying, as it would give you immense pleasure and happiness. On top of that, the money you would be granting will provide great relief to needy people. Also, they would give you blessings for a healthier life. My recent experience is a good case in point. During my vacations, I visited an orphanage where I met two little twins. When I offered them money for buying study stuff, they were highly elated. I still recall the overwhelming joy on their faces, and they gave me lots of blessings to be successful in my life. This is how donating your extra money can be essentially helpful for an economically weaker section of society.
The second reason I see for giving my extra money is that it will make you realize the value of money and the good that money can do. This way, you will appreciate money and feel gratitude toward God for blessing you with this precious resource. Even in our religion, Sikhism, we are instructed to offer one-tenth of our salary for the welfare of poor people. My father’s example will be a good illustration of this point. Since my childhood, I have watched my father give a part of his salary to the needy. In this way, we could know the real worth of money and express our gratitude to the Almighty for this blessing.
In conclusion, I would like to reaffirm my viewpoint that it is better to give money to charity. To recapitulate, donating money for the welfare of poor people can give you internal peace while making others happy. Furthermore, you can express gratitude to God and know the importance of money by observing people who are really in need of it. Therefore, due to the aforementioned reasons, one should always choose to give extra money to charity instead of spending it on unimportant subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ive better and improved lives. This can be really satisfying, as it would give you immense pleasure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77041942605 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64587194958 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487858719647 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8205364528 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1153846154 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4230769231 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19230769231 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323866648732 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921198052629 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808176166454 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221336258953 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608177385824 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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