Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that all of the aspects of a good education quality do not relate to the university professors. And the university managers should take attention to several different things that can have the effect on students abilities. contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that if the university managers can keeping professors satisfy from their jobs, thus it led to they try in harder and it can significantly improve the educational quality and university ranking in the world. I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that the universities should spend more money on professors salary.
First and foremost, now the salary of university professors is one of the highest salaries among all of the jobs in the society and most of them are satisfied with their own salary. Therefore, spending more money on this portion cannot solve any of the problems. However, the professor's works can be more effective if they have more budget for expanding their research projects. In this shape, the professors can accept more graduate students and increase their science reports and papers. Under this condition, the professors are more satisfy because it increases their productivity and improved their position in the university. In addition, the universities through raise in the number of graduate students and gain in science production can improve their world ranking.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that improving the university facilities like laboratory, library and also, improving the quality of buildings have a very important impact on quality of education. Because the good facilities directly affected on the research results. Furthermore, the top talented students and researchers just choose universities with high-quality facilities that can cover their needs for their research projects.
Finally, yet importantly, the university managers should be attention to the importance of social activities for young university students. Because most of the students are for the first time separate from their family and their own city so they need new friends and hubby. Therefore, some activities, for example, concerts or theaters and improving the quality of gyms can create the positive atmosphere in the university and increase students happy and healthy and as result gain in quality of education.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that the universities should be spending more money on the variety of causes not the only salary of professors. Because improving the quality of education related to several different things like research funding and facilities and social programs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46394230769 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82233958453 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9588614036 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.277777778 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45320567066 0.236089414692 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142999504494 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965531634578 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276867947814 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639126588246 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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