Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that most people preferred to work fewer days in each week because they have more time and freedom for a good life than when they should work for five days in a week. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that working three days a week led to higher pressure to employees and more healthy damage o them. However, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that it is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for longer hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
First and foremost, three days working have a lot of healthy and social advantage over five days a week. First, lower traffic and fewer noises and air pollution. Every day we wast a lot of time in the traffic. Incomplete burning fossil fuels when the cars stay on the traffic produce more air pollution than when they are moving, traffic makes people boring and tired and they start to hoot create noise pollution. All of these problems caused nervous and stress for people. However, if people work just three days instead of five days, traffic mass decreased significantly and it helps to improve people physical and psychological health. In addition, people are able to save money by a decline in fuel uses and car repair costs. Furthermore, when people have more free time they have this opportunity to have more attention to their own health through exercise and visit with their doctors.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that if people have work for three days it increase their performance in work-place because they will have done more energy and happiness. At longer weekend people have more time for resting and going to entertainment trips. Because most of the travels need more than one or two days time, and in this way, people have enough time to travel to distant areas. Travel has a lot of positive effect on people mind and raised their energy and happiness, that led to more success in their job and life.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that working for three days a week has several benefits over five days working. Because of its positive social, psychological and health effects of this plan on society.
- TPO 42 85
- TPO41 IndependentDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 39 3
- In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. 88
- It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...t if people have work for three days it increase their performance in work-place because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6815920398 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33182651916 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495024875622 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3010319987 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.705882353 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.523604809453 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168550763857 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197153762273 0.0737576698707 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343132498329 0.150856017488 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213214444203 0.0645574589148 330% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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