In my opinion, I disagree with that the opinion of celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, older people are not good at distinguishing fake news, and they can be easily controlled by those person who spread fake information. With little effort, those bad guys can use social media to confine the information that older people can receive. This way will make older people concerns less or narrowly to real society, and it will also let them to accept opinions from specific celebrities. Therefore, these opinions will be more important to those older people than younger people.
Secondly, older people often have little ways to access new information. This fact will cause that their thought will be controlled more easiler than younger people. Younger people who have a lot of accessing points of information will not be fooled that easily like older ones do. As a result, just like the consequence which is provided above, older people are more likely to accept celebrities' opinion.
Thirdly, growing background of older people are more unsophiscated than younger people nowadays. In today society, plenty of information circulates around and make lifes in it more complex than before. Lack of exposure to exploding information let older people fall into poor condition of recognizing true or fake information. Therefore, older people will more likely to accept celebrities' opinion with the same reason proposed above.
In conclusion, I thinks that older people can still be infulence by celebrities and at some aspects they are more controlled by opinions which provided by celebrities than youner people. The reasons are their intellgence of distinguishing fake information, how they get new information, and their growing background.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
Suggestion: this person; those people; those persons
...s, and they can be easily controlled by those person who spread fake information. With littl...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...son proposed above. In conclusion, I thinks that older people can still be infulenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28239202658 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79367030415 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481727574751 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4253959634 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.375 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370874760378 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157610188333 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119748429216 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258678223471 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663812905843 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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