Personally, I agree that young people nowadays are better able to make decisions about their own lives than young peple in the past. I fell this way for three reason, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, today young people live in the modern societies and can use the well-developed Internet. With this Internet, everyone included young people can easily access the Internet and get some not bad solutions to the problem which they encounter. My personal experience is a compelling example of this claim. When I needed to choose a rent house at last summer, I searched the Internet and got the rent house, which suited my requirment pretty well, soon. This resembles that people in modern society have plenty of information that can help them make decision and it really functon well.
Secondly, nearly everyone in morden society has his own smartphone. This fact means that we can search the Internet, taking memos, and working on our assignment everywhere. In the sight of past people, the powerful function which is brought by smartphones is like the superhuman ability. For example, people in the past only could work their work at a specific place and did not have any production outsides that place. In the contrast, morden people can do all things everywhere with help of smartphone. This means that young people can perform well than people in the past and make better decision.
Thirdly, there are more and better teaching resources nowadays. With these resources, young people can quickly absorb a lot of knowledge which was unavilable in the past. This fact represent that young people have better education and more knowledge than those in the past. As the result, young people nowadays can make better decision than people in the past with the aid of abundant knowledge in their brain.
In conclusion, I think young people in present day have better ability than those in the past to make decisions about their own lives. The reasons are the modern well-developed Internet, smartphones, and better teaching resouces.
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 60
- TPO 40 Integrated Writing Task 70
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- TPO 43 Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wai 66
- TPO 44 Independent Writing TaskSome people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Others believe that it is best to use that time doing thi 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'represents'.
Suggestion: represents
...h was unavilable in the past. This fact represent that young people have better education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03498542274 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54976895585 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0085653799 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8947368421 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398396614098 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136003295918 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142086906262 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276585388594 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974479195201 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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