The internet means that people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. Do you agree or disagree?
The internet provides ample opportunities for the people to experience the world in many different ways. But to ascertain that it is not required to travel abroad is unnecessary due to the presence of the internet would be incorrect. Firstly, because the internet does not give the opportunity to interact with people face to face, thus limiting the experience similar to going abroad. a major part of traveling is meeting new people and doing some activities together that make the experience memorable. Second, tasting the cuisine of a certain country would also require a physical presence. Food is crutial to understanding other cultures, and without being able to taste the country's cuisine it's far more difficult to understand the the way of life in another country. Third it's important to remember that despite seemingly "connecting" the people it does not provide the sense of community and belonging leaving the people feeling more isolated and alone. So the entire experience is highly artificial. Some studies suggest that extensive use of the internet to substitute day to day interactions, lead to increased levels of depression in young adults. which is why it could be considered harmful, if its used too regularly. But there are certainly many benefits to the internet and in some cases, on a superficial level, it does make it easier to understand how others live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...the experience similar to going abroad. a major part of traveling is meeting new ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ne its far more difficult to understand the the way of life in another country. Third i...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ne its far more difficult to understand the the way of life in another country. Third i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, third, thus, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1592920354 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03100897854 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6314391161 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219770499703 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710068041547 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559808538375 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219770499703 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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