Both living in country side and big city side has it's own merits and demerits for the children growth like coin has two sides. Here I want explore the both aspect of that is good and bad about living in country side as well as city.
Firstly, I want say about good things of living in village, when we are having opportunity live in country side we can enjoy the natural like breathing fresh air which is unpolluted and good for health. And more country is very less populated one so the spread infection to human being as well as animals also very less unlike city. Further more, we can have very good social interaction each other like a family that is not possible in city. You feel more secure when children growing villages.
Secondly, demerits in living in country side, firs for most lack good education system in village side. Actually I am also from village only, for in order write Toefl exam suppose to nearest city because I don't have access. Further when I was in my village there was no internet facility, telephone and so on. All every big institute are located in city side. Village transportation are very poor , for example in order fly one hour I am suppose to travel more than four hour to reach my nearest airport that is disgusting for me.
Thirdly, advantages of living in big city, in city you see diverge people, culture, privacy, luxuries life style and can earn more money when compare with the rural area. Cities has always lot job opportunities, economical more stable place. In city one can clime in the social ladder from the bottom to top level whereas in village highly impossible to clime in social because villages inherited one. So if children expose this environment they can enjoy this fruits.
Fourthly, compare with country side crime rate are very high in city side and when children growing in this situation their securities are doubtful. Moreover cities more prone for drug uses and immoral activity place whereas villages morally very good. So children living this place may be deviated from moral and ethics.
To sum up, each place it has it own advantages and disadvantages so how are guiding children very important than where they are live.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27033492823 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11004784689 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0765550239234 0.046263068375 165% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0478468899522 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124401913876 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0311004784689 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33191310712 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167464114833 0.0309702414327 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00239234449761 0.00188951952338 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.0478468899522 0.0887237588012 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143540669856 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0239234449761 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2229.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8046875 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309895833333 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231770833333 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127604166667 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0703125 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33191310712 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.9076621957 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5157181778 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.315789474 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.3876096491 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.63302752294 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343456646662 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0782329618294 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0752627692142 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537549334553 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190440035367 0.151897553556 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118742885625 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691506035787 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269311157356 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0488095558714 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196550464507 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634309195708 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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