It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in big city .Do you agree or disagree ?
It is believed by experts that environment can affect children's future and health in many various ways.In my opinion ,both growing children in countryside and big city has some advantages and disadvantages that is different in personal aspects.I feel these ways for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
At the beginning, countryside isn't crowded and by this reason, it has less traffic and less pollution that helps children's health.In this area ,organic products are more available that influence growing process in the best condition.Children who mature there , are more calmly due to being close with nature. So, nature give serenity to human.In addition , the level of stress in parents of children who are in this location is extremely low that they transfer their peace to chidren .On the other hand, people who live in big cities are in a hurry most of their life and they impact child with their discomposure. Most of air contaminant are in big cities that make hazardous disease in both children and adults.
As cities flourish, facilities and equipment expand.Children need possibilities for their progression that have provided by big city.In the great situation they can get help of environment to represent their ingenuity and prepare condition to grow.Technology develop faster in big cities and make lives easier for individuals. On the contrary,in country side people possess low equipment and opportunety for children get reduce.As a result, children by being in big city can envisage better future and more job's choice for them.
Some psychologist agree with Children who are in countryside are more tend to be gracious than who are in a big city.so because of their situation they meet relatieves more and their relationships are closely and chummy.
To sum it all up, I think situation have great effects in children's life.It could be considered it is better for children to grow up in the countryside ,due to the facts that environment can play crucial role in mental and physical health of children that is the most important aspects of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1495601173 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90456275505 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7746614837 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.5 100.406767564 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.625 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339062240587 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161507425735 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576962685218 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196133121165 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500895892584 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 11.7677419355 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 58.1214874552 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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