Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money is the most important part in our lives. We cannot buy anything without having money. It is always better to save your money for future needs, emergencies, etc. instead of use it for immediate enjoyment. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays for every reason we need to spend money. Without money life is crucial. People should always save their money for future needs, emergencies. For example, As a student, many students are staying far from their home. In case of any emergency we can use saving money. Emergency can be anything like an accident. In such cases instead of asking for money help from others it is always better to have savings with you. On the other hand, if I do not have any savings, then I might have to face many problems.
Secondly, many people lose their job due to several reasons but before getting another job savings helps them in that time.
Saving helps in future. It allows people to be relaxed and enjoy life without worries. Savings does not waste; if we could not use our savings; we could help others, those who are in need of it. For instance, we can donate our money to needy people who lost their houses, properties, etc.
For working people, we should spend money within the limited budget. While we are young, we should spend money to buy experience and happiness some time. Because money is the important tool for opportunity and advancement, so spending it wisely is the best solution to a happy life. For example, I enjoyed traveling to good restaurants and spending a lot of money trying a new kind of food. That moment brought happiness to me. It is not only exploring new places, but I also enjoy traveling and experiencing new things with friends. Today I don't frequently travel as before but the experience from exploring new things with the money that I earn teaches me to view the world in a different way.
In conclusion, spending money wisely to buy experience is not a stuff and limit spending to save for the next chapter of life. Some people spend their whole life making money only; some spend in enjoyment only, both are not good. I believe maintaining balance between both is essential, because enjoyment is also important to keep ourselves active, relax, and fresh. But, there should be limitations. We should keep track of our expenditure and savings. This helps us to reduce our expenses and increase our savings. Hence, we should save some money for emergencies and for the future, instead of spending it immediately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hat I earn teaches me to view the world in a different way. In conclusion, spending money wisely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73378076063 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46758484577 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485458612975 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5205865888 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.125 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.96875 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292842814796 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800116345579 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797303192954 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155710730679 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07387265456 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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