It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject
Undoubtedly, one of the foremost and paramount ambitions of all human beings is being prosperous, and they always make an effort to attain this purpose. However, success has a different meaning among people, and there are a lot of factors that have effect on it. Indeed, knowledge of academic subjects plays a significant role in people’s life. While a large number of people believe that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, in my point of view specialize in one specific subject is more beneficial.
By growth of the academic subjects and diversity of academic fields this is impossible that someone have deep knowledge in all subjects, we know that our life is restricted by the time and we have no time for learning about every fields. Another reason is personal talent, people have different talent and everyone based on his genetics, environment, education and also unknown reasons has a special level of IQ and talent, according these factors some people cannot learn about some sciences. Actually if you want to have broad knowledge of many subjects you need to learn shallow knowledge in each fields. All of us want to get a good job and this is important part of our life, the person with specialization in specific subject can gets a good job compared who has a broad but shallow knowledge in many subjects. In the world some great scientists had only one or two specific field such as Edison, Pastor, Beal and others, so these are good example for us that choose best way to being success.
Specialization in specific subject helps to concentrate on the subject and that causes to learn more about information, theories, and ideas and also that makes learner more creative. There is no doubt if your knowledge is deep enough you probably challenge some theories or make an idea about your specific subject. The important aspect is that you can be a researcher in your academic subject and write a lot of scientific articles, which are impossible to write without plenty of knowledge and hard effort. We have exclusive interest taste and always we are interested in one special field and we love to learn more about that and being success in that area.
In spite what mentioned before, it is not debatable broad knowledge has some advantages. Human brain can keep and learn plenty of information and with broad information brain can be creative and active, because capacity of brain is high. Other advantage is using this information in some critical situations, for instance we can use our medicine information in where there is no medical facilities and someone needs help, in this situation our specialize doesn’t work but our little medicine knowledge is critical for someone’s life.
In recapitulation, each person depending on his characteristics and temperaments believe that It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject or not. For me second is acceptable but also another important subjects can be useful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...icant role in people's life. While a large number of people believe that it is better to hav...
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Line 4, column 882, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'field' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fields'.
Suggestion: fields
...scientists had only one or two specific field such as Edison, Pastor, Beal and others...
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Line 4, column 967, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'choose the best'.
Suggestion: choose the best
..., so these are good example for us that choose best way to being success. Specialization...
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Line 4, column 974, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
...ese are good example for us that choose best way to being success. Specialization...
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Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...centrate on the subject and that causes to learn more about information, theories, and i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247803163445 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.138840070299 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121265377856 0.0866891130778 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386643233743 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0509666080844 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121265377856 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0193321616872 0.0351676179071 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81217849144 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210896309315 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0843585237258 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01230228471 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105448154657 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3096.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 513.0 408.028673835 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0350877193 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345029239766 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29044834308 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208576998051 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136452241715 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81217849144 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458089668616 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.9391212475 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6597156936 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.947368421 120.699889404 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 56.044834308 45.7405998639 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.7 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489837721027 0.300154397459 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10148260037 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593697273442 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531308093094 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12429706568 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204254583906 0.114077575197 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148302738508 0.0781384742642 190% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369515752351 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109535857584 0.067059652881 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370529179888 0.210909579961 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15116306087 0.0618886996521 244% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.