It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The surrounding environment plays an important role on our lives. It is the place where we spend most of our times and live many years of our life, which leads us to think about our surroundings. Many people argue that the decision of establishing a large shopping center in our neighborhood is a fantastic idea. However, other opposes and contends that it is bad idea for allowing a shopping center to be established in our locality. In my view, the decision of establishing a large center in our neighborhood is a great thinking for few reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
The main reason is that the shopping center would create employment opportunity in our locality, which is essential for a underdeveloped area like us. In order to build the shopping center, the company will recruit workers, engineers, architects and many other people. For example, few years back I was living at a city of eastern part of my country for my job. At that time, the authority gave permission for establishing a fish-processing farm. At the beginning, many people contended this decision and was creating pressure to cancel the decision. But the government was firmed about it’s decision and finally the decision proved successful. Because the project created job opportunity and many other linkage industries were created, which recruited many local people and contributed to the development of economy. This shows that how an industry can change the life style of the people of an area.
The other reason is that it would increase the collection of government revenue. This additional revenue could be used for the development of the area. This means that the government had more fund to spend for infrastructure developments like roads, bridges, highways. For instance, few years ago, a new garments factory was built. The factory paid a significant amount of money as taxes to government. As a result of commencing the garments factory, the whole area changed greatly. Many roads, highways were built for easy transportation of people and many schools were upgraded for providing the quality education to the students. This was possible only because of available funds to the government, which was collected as taxes from the factory. As you can see, these developments in my friend’s locality were not possible without the establishment of the factory.
In sum, although some oppose the plan, a shopping center would be a great a addition to my locality. Not only it will not raise the life styles of the people through creating employment opportunity but also the added government revenue could be used for the infrastructure of the area. Therefore, every city should try to introduce new business such as shopping center in their community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in our locality, which is essential for a underdeveloped area like us. In order t...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'garments'' or 'garment's'?
Suggestion: garments'; garment's
...ays. For instance, few years ago, a new garments factory was built. The factory paid a s...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'garments'' or 'garment's'?
Suggestion: garments'; garment's
...vernment. As a result of commencing the garments factory, the whole area changed greatly...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lan, a shopping center would be a great a addition to my locality. Not only it wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0967032967 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95886053976 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481318681319 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9303264484 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.76 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12232526002 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403307828678 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427685848433 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871825125395 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311490325612 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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