It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
By and large, the formation of a new restaurant in not only my neighborhood but also everywhere in my hometown will benefit most people. I firmly support this plan due to two compelling and conclusive reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will aptly elaborate on my own perspective.
No one can deny the significant influence of this plan on the economic condition in my neighborhood. It goes without saying that if a restaurant had been established in my hometown, it would have afforded people with a lot of opportunities to land in a good job. Take a personal example, as an illustration, to elucidate the issue in the better way; five years ago, I resigned from my previous job because I wanted to find my dream job, and I could not find any job for longer than one year, let alone an appropriate one. I had spent all my money, and I did not have a penny in my pocket. As time elapsed, a small grocery store has established in my neighboring, and I was landed that job. Not only did it enhance my economic situation, but also I found that job as my dream job, and after a few years, I have had my own grocery store. My personal experience could be generalized in this way that some people might have found their dream job as a waiter, or a chef had that restaurant formed around my house.
Another cause that convinces me to hold this plan is that I lived in a town where there are a limited number of restaurants, and for me, this plan will be a time-saving as well as an economical. Although I really enjoy cooking, I usually eat in restaurants, and this event will provide me with two substantial advantages; the first one is that it will be economical, for I spend quite a lot of money for reaching the nearest restaurant. Furthermore, it will be time-saving, because I waste my time as well to attend that restaurant. For example, if I wanted to have an ordinary meal, it would cost approximately 45 dollars, one of the third of which will be wasted because of the far distance between my home and the closest restaurant.
Taking all the aforementioned reasons, and examples into account, I conclude that this plan is my favor due to creating several job opportunities, saving my time, as well as saving my money. I highly recommend that the reported reasons be taken as additional information to be considered by authorities who involve in this plan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... in my hometown, it would have afforded people with a lot of opportunities to land in ...
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Line 11, column 181, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...s plan will be a time-saving as well as an economical. Although I really enjoy cooking, I usu...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n my home and the closest restaurant. Taking all the aforementioned reasons, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, third, well, for example, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59624413146 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93186380026 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.110885383 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103029837265 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478229178212 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472873205978 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830518408953 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302086409003 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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