A controversial issue, relating to whether it is important to know events happing around the word despite some of them may not have impact on our routine life, has been brought to the attention of the public. Relevant authorities are urged that this congition contributes to the personal identification and knowledge. Form my perspective of review, the above statement is agreeable and accordingly some reasons are illustrated below.
The first aspect to point out is that, the fully understanding of a serise of events triggers the identification of ourself. If we can dive into the inside mechanism of how related things happed, we can obtain insights of ingredients that boost some phenomenon and the compoents that seemingly conspicuous to have effect on some particular characteristics. Both can be employed by us to cultivate some personal habits spontaneously and finally help to identifying what kind of person that we are. For example, one of my friend, Jimmy, who were in a relationship with a girl in the past, and once he heard about a sex scandal of a celebrity who was famous for his hamony family, and with the development of this events, he knew that the kindness was the key factor of a good husband and subcequently, he paid more attention to his girlfriend. His girlfriend was surprised at first and treated him better in turn. Finally, they had a great and sweet mutual memory when they were couple.
A furthermore singificant point is that, as the old proverb goes, know a lot of thing, say a lot of thins. this proverb means absorbing sorts of things boosts the communication skills we have, because we have more raw meterials to say. And this communication skill is critical that it can make our career path traceable as well as our personal development. Take me as an example. When I first knew the election of American president, I was shock of the complex procedures, though it was for away of my real life. Consequently, I was wondering how to design a good practice o f a particular objective, which triggered me to choose mangement as my major. Within my undergraduate time, I learned a lot of classes, tutorials and seminars, and now I have high capability to say the mangement skills at ease. I become a highly professional kind of person and I have success in the term of personal development. So all this story begins at the day that I start to pay attention to a events happening in the other side of the earth.
- Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past 73
- It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life 76
- it is not a good thing to move to a new city or country because we will lose old friends 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ony family, and with the development of this events, he knew that the kindness was t...
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Line 3, column 979, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'coupled'.
Suggestion: coupled
... and sweet mutual memory when they were couple. A furthermore singificant point is...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
... is that, as the old proverb goes, know a lot of thing, say a lot of thins. this proverb means...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...now a lot of thing, say a lot of thins. this proverb means absorbing sorts of things...
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Line 5, column 975, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he day that I start to pay attention to a events happening in the other side of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as for, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01349758177 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558962264151 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0412910221 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814621143689 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240106957931 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409311827744 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634057478409 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318081150219 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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