It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Agree or disagree?
In recent decades, the information, from the other regions, is easily to acquire than before. Several people have discussed that whether should we pay attention on those events, occurring in the worldwide, although they may not affect our routine life. In my personal opinions, I will definitely advocate that being informed about what is happening in other country.
First of all, to know the international issues is beneficial to provide individual insight in the conversation. Here an example sneaks in my mind. When I was senior in the university, I had abundant chances to cooperate with intelligent classmates. Those classmates had a great deal of enthusiasms in discussing global issues because I spent massive time to receive the worldwide issues allowing me to share my own argument during the conversation. Thus, I had excellent relationship with those savvy friends. If I were not engaging in acquiring global new, I would probably waste the best chance to connect with those friends, tending to broaden their vision.
Secondly, the more events I obtain from around the world, the more I realize that the whole world is interdependent. For instance, even though the current global big news, Russia invades Ukraine, seems not to directly influence our daily life. The inflation, however, is surging resulting in the war of the two country, supporting me to understand the world is connecting compactly. If I were not obtaining those international news, I might never had the chance to realize the fact, the world is highly intertwined.
To sum up, I certainly believe that everyone should keep on the news in worldwide, even though they may not affect our life. Because it serves an excellent opportunity to widen our worldview. Moreover, based on the current happening, the global events are actually affecting our routine life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en though they may not affect our life. Because it serves an excellent opportunity to w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19127516779 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89465079035 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7624475975 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184950529213 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510884420544 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548356756323 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10869656389 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567638021482 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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