It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
The world is, as we all know, huge. Thought it is highly impossible to be aware of all the happenings around the world, it is definitely important to know about some major events around the world even if it is unlikely tat they will affect our daily life. To support my stance, I provide the following views.
First, even if the events have no impact on our daily lives now, it is definitely plausible that similar situation might occur in the near future. Let us take an example of a chronic disease knows as the Swine Flu. Suppose that the flu is prevalent in a foreign country say the United States and we have never heard of the situation before. Since it is a terminal disease, by gaining enough information about the causes of the diseases we can avoid the disease in our country and spread awareness among the fellow citizens. We can also learn of the various prevention methods in case of any unexpected mishaps. In such scenarios, information about the world events can prove out to be a matter of life and death.
Secondly as we gain knowledge about the various events that are popular, it might make a great topic for healthy and fun discussions with friends. The United states government is shut down over Trump's demand to build a walls across Mexico. Even though I am not a US Citizen neither I plan to travel to the states, this would still add to my knowledge of US Politics and can be a great fun topic of discussion with friends.
Another advantage of staying up-to-date with the world's affairs is the learning involved. The events might not directly affect us, but it might affect some acquaintances and our knowledge can prove out to be useful. To state one such scenario, my friend was travelling to California to visit the city. He was completely unaware of the forest fires that had taken place. Since I learnt about it through newspapers, I was able to inform him about the situation and saved him the pain to travel all the way to airport since the airports were shut down.
Many would refute this by claiming that since the events doesn't affect us, we would like to concentrate more on ourselves and our nation which might lead to it's betterment. While this is definitely true, it is debatable. Knowledge about the world events can positively influence us to take steps for ourselves.To support this, I provide an example of one of my friends. My friend John followed a really unhealthy lifestyles and had junk food three times a day.He was suffering from various conditions such as obesity, hair fall, acne. He came to know about this widespread lifestyle of ketogenic diet and intermittent fasting popular in the Europe. Once he gained enough information, he became an avid follower of the same and was able to heal himself within a month.
Someone has rightly said 'Knowledge can never hurt'. While it might seem useless, it might be used at some point. Therefore, I firmly believe that people should always try and be aware of various events throughout the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70777988615 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51418065897 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518026565465 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1863982738 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4230769231 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2692307692 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264251499331 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641694973365 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120214182248 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154453366312 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168098387293 0.0645574589148 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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