It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Living in an era when we are covered by floods of information, sometimes people are getting tired of reading constantly popping up messages. Therefore some individuals advocate that it is time we put down our cellphones and ignore the irrelevant events happening around others, while the opposing opinions also exist. From my perspective, I firmly believe that we must keep up with the upcoming event, even though they may not affect our daily life.
To begin with, getting in touch with the latest news will provide us excellent access to the constantly changing world and help us remain open-minded. Chances are that we have to absorb new knowledge every day, otherwise, we will lose from the start line. The innovation of artificial intelligence seems to have nothing to do with your personal life, but knowing about that information will enrich you with cutting-edge knowledge, helping you stand out among peers. Also, it seems that the political events, like the selection of candidates, has nothing to do with our common life, but reflections on those hot-debated issues indeed help us develop critical thinking, offering us a brand new insight to see through the social problems clearly, which help you become a wise man. Next time you come across a complex reading assignment, you will fully exert your thinking ability utilizing accumulated knowledge. Therefore, keeping up with update news allows us to enrich ourselves with cutting-edge knowledge, and bring us unique insights.
Secondly, knowing about events happening around the world help us better adapt to the changing world, since the situation described in the report may occur in our own lives. It seems that we are now having a quiet harmony life, living away from wars, diseases or religious conflicts. Chances are that life stability cannot be ensured forever. What if you run into some emergencies by accident, like a car accident or suddenly appearing tornadoes? What can we do to save us from that? If you have read about reports like that, under that circumstance you will know the exact right thing to do instead of panicking. Thus, knowing about so-called irrelevant events can help us adjust to emergencies and help us make things through.
Although it is undeniable that always stay online, receiving every event is quite exhausting. Sometimes, we just want to unwind ourselves and stay away from annoying messages. However, considering the benefits I mentioned above, it is inappropriate for us to block access to knowing events utterly.
To sum up, the advantages of staying online to get daily events are ubiquitous and we should manage to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0504587156 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62214048804 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594036697248 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.512918877 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231577185083 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657799209642 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642284084737 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120347622894 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505242869335 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.