Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that taking a part-time job for children have a lot of useful effects so it is better that parents encouraged and let it their children for this kind of experience. Contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that in the part-time jobs mainly student became busy with very mediocre works and they do not learn some practical things so it is better for them to enroll in some extra classes and increased their knowledge about their lesson. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that a part-time job is a very helpful experience for children.
First and foremost, this is a good opportunity for students till know with the real world. Because the atmosphere of the academic place is very different with companies. For example, when I for the first time arrive in my first job the behavior for other employees and people really surprised me. Most of the time we were a very kind relationship with new people arrived at our university but their behavior was completely different. This position job was competitive so they try to annoy me from my decision. I spend very hard and long time to learn how I should be making good relationship with them but if I have part time job anywhere certainly it has happened sooner for me.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that this work can be improved their responsibility. they know that to preserve their job should go to the work-place on time. Thus, they learn to have the plan and especial daily program.
Finally, yet importantly, when they obtain money from their own job it has very awesome feeling for them. In addition, they have more impact on their money and promoting to managing their money. Surely, the instruments or things that they buy with own money have more value for them and it remained on their mind. For example, my father always, tells about his experience with this issue.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above. I am convinced that take a part-time job is very helpful for students. Because during that they practicing responsibility, personality, planning, and also the relationship with others.
- Tpo 49 73
- TPO-39- In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. 71
- TPO 17 – task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better than they are. 70
- one of the best ways that parents can help their children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 70
- TPO 35- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...students till know with the real world. Because the atmosphere of the academic place is...
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Line 2, column 616, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...od relationship with them but if I have part time job anywhere certainly it has happened ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...k can be improved their responsibility. they know that to preserve their job should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8128342246 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64965572394 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521390374332 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3373298697 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7368421053 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251739422618 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885863561181 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659708127521 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151095176105 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065777475936 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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